Cole thumbnail 2 provides a clear illustration of what the flyer might represent. The headline can be a lot stronger and by providing a subheader it'll help the audience understand the importance behind choosing to support local businesses. Illustrations that demonstrate what makes fast fashion or shopping with larger brands negative may help strengthen the overall messages.
It's hard to get a read on what exactly the issue is at a glance on designs 1, and 3 but 2 stands out in that respect. The focus on support of local businesses helps pull viewers in and gives a concrete reason to pick up the flier. More detail is needed on these to really get a further idea of how these communicate your issue, a subheader, or hash tags would benefit these designs greatly. The combination of the header in design 1 and 3 with the one depicted in 2 may be a good place to start as it covers both the "fast fashion" side of the issue as well as the support of local businesses.
The most visually appealing without reading the header or sub header is thumbnail #3. The other 2 thumbnails are a bit unclear, however after reading about your new topic, they're understandable now. When calling something to action, make sure its clear, concise, and straight to the point. When its visually pleasing and eye catching people will want to read more
Cole thumbnail 2 provides a clear illustration of what the flyer might represent. The headline can be a lot stronger and by providing a subheader it'll help the audience understand the importance behind choosing to support local businesses. Illustrations that demonstrate what makes fast fashion or shopping with larger brands negative may help strengthen the overall messages.
ReplyDeleteIt's hard to get a read on what exactly the issue is at a glance on designs 1, and 3 but 2 stands out in that respect. The focus on support of local businesses helps pull viewers in and gives a concrete reason to pick up the flier.
ReplyDeleteMore detail is needed on these to really get a further idea of how these communicate your issue, a subheader, or hash tags would benefit these designs greatly.
The combination of the header in design 1 and 3 with the one depicted in 2 may be a good place to start as it covers both the "fast fashion" side of the issue as well as the support of local businesses.
The most visually appealing without reading the header or sub header is thumbnail #3. The other 2 thumbnails are a bit unclear, however after reading about your new topic, they're understandable now. When calling something to action, make sure its clear, concise, and straight to the point. When its visually pleasing and eye catching people will want to read more
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